Double
Entry
Entry
Towards the middle of the day and at midday I happened to be on and got on to the
platform and the balcony at the back of an S-line and of a Contrescarpe-Champerret
bus and passenger transport vehicle which was packed and to all intents and purposes
full. I saw and noticed a young man and an old adolescent who was rather ridiculous
and pretty grotesque; thin neck and skinny windpipe, string and cord round his hat
and tile. After a scrimmage and scuffle he says and states in a lachrymose and
snivelling voice and tone that his neighbour and fellow-traveller is deliberately trying
and doing his utmost to push him and obtrude himself on him every time anyone gets
off and makes an exit. This having been declared and having spoken he rushes
headlong and wends his way towards a vacant and a free place and seat.
Two hours after and a hundred-and-twenty minutes later, I meet him and see him
again in the Cour de Rome and in front of the gare Saint-Lazare. He is with and in the
company of a friend and pal who is advising and urging him to have a button and
vegetable and ivory disc added and sewn on to his overcoat and mantle.
Notation
In the S bus, in the rush hour. A chap of about 26, felt hat with a cord instead of a
ribbon, neck too long, as if someone's been having a tug-of-war with it. People getting
off. The chap in question gets annoyed with one of the men standing next to him. He
accuses him of jostling him every time anyone goes past. A snivelling tone which is
meant to be aggressive. When he sees a vacant seat he throws himself on to it. Two
hours later, I meet him in the Cour de Rome, in front of the gare Saint-Lazare. He's
with a friend who's saying: "You ought to get an extra button put on your overcoat."
He shows him where (at the lapels) and why.
Litotes
Some of us were travelling together. A young man, who didn't look very intelligent,
spoke to the man next to him for a few moments, then he went and sat down. Two
hours later I met him again; he was with a friend and was talking about clothes.
Noble
At the hour when the rosy fingers of the dawn start to crack I climbed, rapid as a
tongue of flame, into a bus, of the S-line of sinuous course. I noticed, with the
precision and acuity of a Red Indian on a warpath, the presence of a young man
whose neck was longer than that of the swift-footed giraffe, and whose felt hat was
adorned with a plait like the hero of an exercise in style. Baleful Discord with breasts
of soot came with her mouth reeking of a nothingness of toothpaste. Discord, I say,
came to breathe her malignant virus between this young man with the giraffe neck
and the plait round his hat, and a passenger of irresolute and farinaceous mien. The
former addressed himself to the latter in these terms: "I say, you, anyone might think
you were treading on my toes on purpose!" Having said these words, the young man
with the giraffe neck and the plait round his hat quickly went and sat down.
Later, in the Cour de Rome of majestic proportions, I again caught sight of the young
man with the giraffe neck and the plait round his hat, accompanied by his friend, an
arbiter elegantiarum, who was uttering these words of censure which I could hear
with my agile ear, censure which was directed to the most exterior garment of the
young man with the giraffe neck and the plait round his hat: "You ought to diminish
its opening by the addition or elevation of a button to or on its circular periphery."
Progno-
stication
stication
When midday strikes you will be on the rear platform of a bus which will be crammed
full of passengers among whom you will notice a ridiculous juvenile; skeleton-like
neck and no ribbon on his felt hat. He don't be feeling at his ease, poor little chap. He
will think that a gentleman is pushing him on purpose every time that people getting
on or off pass by. He will tell him so but the gentleman won't deign to answer. And
the ridiculous juvenile will be panic-stricken and run away from him in the direction
of a vacant seat.
You will see him a little later, in the Cour de Rome in front of the gate Saint-Lazare.
A friend will be with him and you will hear these words: "Your overcoat doesn't do
up properly; you must have another button put on it."
Apo-
strophe
strophe
O platinum-nibbed stylograph, let thy smooth and rapid course trace on this singleside
calendered paper those alphabetic glyphs which shall transmit to men of
sparkling spectacles the narcissistic tale of a double encounter of omnibusilistic
cause. Proud courser of my dreasm, faithful camel of my literary exploits, lissome
fountain of words counted, weighed and chosen, describe thou those lexicographic
and syntactic curves which shall graphically create the futile and ridiculous narration
of the life and opinions of that young man who one day took the S bus without
suspecting that he would become the immortal hero of the present writer's laborious
toil. O coxcomb with thy plait-girdled hat projecting over thy long neck, O crossgrained,
choleric and pusillanimous cur who, fleeing the skirmish, wentest to place
thy behind, harvester of kicks on the arse, on a bench of hardened wood, didst thou
suspect this thy rhetorical destiny whilst, before the gate Saint-Lazare, thou wast
listening with exalted ear to the tailoring counsel of a personage inspired by the
uppermost button of thine overcoat?
Narrative
One day at about midday in the Parc Monceau district, on the back platform of a more
or less full S bus (now No. 84), I observed a person with a very long neck who was
wearing a felt hat which had a plaited cord round it instead of a ribbon. This
individual suddenly addressed the man standing next to him, accusing him of
purposely treading on his toes every time any passengers got on or got off. However
he quickly abandoned the dispute and threw himself on to a seat which had become
vacant.
Two hours later I saw him in front of the gare Saint-Lazare engaged in earnest
conversation with a friend who was advising him to reduce the space between the
lapels of his overcoat by getting a competent tailor to raise the top button.
Nega-
tivities
tivities
It was neither a boat, nor an aeroplane, but a terrestrial means of transport. It was
neither the morning, nor the evening, but midday. It was neither a baby, nor an old
man, but a young man. It was neither a ribbon, nor a string, but a plaited cord. It was
neither a procession, nor a brawl, but a scuffle. It was neither a pleasant person, nor
an evil person, but a bad-tempered person. It was neither a truth, nor a lie, but a
pretext. It was neither a standing person, nor a recumbent person, but a would-beseated
person.
It was neither the day before, nor the day after, but the same day. It was neither the
gare du Nord, nor the gare du P.-L.-M. but the gare Saint-Lazare. It was neither a
relation, nor a stranger, but a friend. It was neither insult, nor ridicule, but sartorial
advice.
Distinguo
In an S bus (which is not to be confused with a trespass) I saw (not an eyesore) a chap
(not a Bath one) wearing a soft hat (and not a hot daft sack), which hat was encircled
by a plaited cord (and not by an applauded cat). One of his characteristics (and not his
character's instincts) was a prim neck (and not a numb prick). As the people were
pushing and shoving (and not the sheep were shooshing and pupping), a newcomer
(not a cute number) displaced the latter (not lacerated the display). The chap
complained (not the chaplain comped), but seeing a free place (not placing a free See)
made a bee-line for it (not bade me lie in for it).
Later I perceived him (not high Erse peeved 'im) in front of the gare Saint-Lazare
(and not the lass in Gaza). He was talking to a friend (and not trending to a fork)
about a button on his coat (which is not to be confused with a cut on--?--on his boat.)
Passive
It was midday. The bus was being got into by passengers. They were being squashed
together. A hat was being worn on the head of a young gentleman, which hat was
encircled by a plait and not by a ribbon. A long neck was one of the characteristics of
the young gentleman. The man standing next to him was being grumbled at by the
latter because of the jostling which was being inflicted on him by him. As soon as a
vacant seat was espied by the young gentleman it was made the object of his
precipitate movements and it became sat down upon.
The young gentleman was later seen by me in front of the gare Saint-Lazare. He was
clothed in an overcoat and was having a remark made to him by a friend who
happened to be there to the effect that it was necessary to have an extra button put on
it.
Excla-
mations
mations
Goodness! Twelve o'clock! time for the bus! what a lot of people! what a lot of
people! aren't we squashed! bloody funny! that chap! what a face! and what a neck!
two-foot long! at least! and the cord! the cord! I hadn't seen it! the cord! that's the
bloody funniest! oh! the cord! round his hat! A cord! bloody funny! too bloody funny!
here we go, now he's yammering! the chap with the cord! at the chap next to him!
what's he saying! The other chap! claims he trod on his toes! They're going to come to
blows! definitely! no, though! yes they are, though! go wonn! go wonn! bit him in the
eye! charge! hit 'im! well I never! no, though! he's climbing down! the chap! with the
long neck! with the cord! it's a vacant seat he's charging! yes! the chap!
Well! 't's true! no! I'm right! it's really him! over there! in the Cour de Rome! in front
of the gare Saint-Lazare! mooching up and down! with another chap! and what's the
other chap telling him! that he ought to get an extra button! yes! a button on his coat!
On his coat!
Asides
The bus arrived bulging with passengers. Only hope I don't miss it, oh good, there's
still just room for me. One of them queer sort of mug he's got with that enormous
neck was wearing a soft felt hat with a sort of little plait round it instead of a ribbon
just showing off that is and suddenly started hey what's got into him to vituperate the
other chap isn't taking any notice of him reproaching him for deliberately treading
seems as if he's looking for trouble but he'll climb down on his toes. But as there was
a free seat inside didn't I say so he turned his back and made haste to occupy it.
About two hours later coincidences are peculiar he was in the Cour de Rome wiht a
friend a fancy-pants of his own sort who was pointing with his index finger to a
button on his overcoat what on earth can he be telling him
Olfactory
In that meridian S, apart from the habitual smell, there was a smell of beastly seedy
ego, of effrontery, of jeering, of H-bombs, of a high jakes, of cakes and ale, of
emnations , of opium, of curious ardent esquimos, of tumescent venal double-usurers,
of extraordinary white zoosperms, there was a certain scent of long juvenile neck, a
certain perspiration of plaited cord, a certain pungency of anger, a certain loose and
constipated stench, which were so unmistakeable that when I passed the gare Saint-
Lazare two hours later I recognized them and identified them in the cosmetic, modish
and tailoresque perfume which emnated from a badly placed button.
Gustatory
This particular bus had a certain taste. Curious, but undeniable. All buses don't have
the same taste. That's often said, but it's true. Just try the experiment. This one--an S,
not to make too great a mystery of it--had the suspicion of a flavour of grilled
peanuts, not to go into too great detail. The platform had its own special bouquet,
peanuts not just grilled but trodden as well. One metre 60 above the trampolin, a
gourmand, only there wasn't one there, would have been able to taste something
rather sourish which was the neck of a man about thirty. And twenty centimetres
higher still, the refined palate was offered the rare opportunity of sampling a plaited
cord just slightly tinged with the flavor of cocoa. Next we sampled the chewing gum
of dispute, the chestnuts of irritation, the grapes of wrath and a bunch of bitterness.
Two hours later we were entitled to the dessert: an overcoat button...a real delicacy.
Visual
The general effect is green with a white top, oblong, with windows. 'Tisn't as easy as
all that to do windows. The platform isn't any colour, it's half grey half brown if it
must be something. The most important thing is it's full of curves, lots of esses as you
might say. but the way it is at midday, rush hour, it's an extraordinary mess. To get
somewhere near it you'd have to extract from the magma a light ochre rectangle, put a
light ochre oval on top, and then on top of that again, stick a darkish ochre hat which
you'd encircle with a plait of burnt Siena, all mixed-up, at that. Then you'd shove in a
patch the colour of duck's muck to represent fury, a red triangle to represent anger,
and just a pissworth of green to portray suppressed bile and squittery funk.
After that you'd draw one of those sweet darling little navy blue overcoats and, near
the top of it, just below the opening, you'd put a darling little button drawn with great
precision and loving care.
More
or Less
or Less
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nod neck and a nodder rat--a bitterest ring a rwo and it. All over sodden he star tedder
Cree eight bee cause us odd was trading honest toast on purpose. But then nurse eat
bee came they can't, Andy rushed often RQ ditto band on in the ark you meant.
Too ours lay terror sore him Infanta the Cars and Ladder in gage din along conifer
rents Orly bout abut on.
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